In this wonderful pattern of things you actually get an A+ for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost us was in your details. As they say, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more accurate here. Having said that, allow me tell you what did deliver the results. Your writing is actually really powerful which is probably the reason why I am taking an effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can easily notice the leaps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not confident of just how you seem to connect your details which in turn produce the actual conclusion. For the moment I shall yield to your position but hope in the foreseeable future you connect the facts better.