In this grand pattern of things you actually get a B- for effort. Where exactly you actually misplaced everybody was on all the specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more true here. Having said that, permit me say to you what exactly did do the job. The article (parts of it) is definitely really powerful which is probably the reason why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can easily notice a leaps in reason you make, I am definitely not confident of exactly how you appear to unite the details that help to make the actual conclusion. For now I will yield to your issue but wish in the future you actually connect the facts better.