Throughout the excellent design of things you receive a B- for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost everybody was first in the facts. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more accurate right here. Having said that, let me reveal to you exactly what did deliver the results. Your article (parts of it) is actually very powerful and this is possibly why I am making an effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can certainly see the jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily sure of exactly how you seem to connect the details that produce your conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue however wish in the near future you actually connect the facts better.